21-Dec-2019, 11:46 AM
Hi Tenkai, as you asked for constructive feedback and I prefer to get that too, here we go:
First of all: Thank you for taking time to apply and I hope you are doing better now than in your very harsh times.
Sadly I cannot accept your app for multiple reasons, I'll go through it for build after build.
Build 1: Landscaping is important on WoK, but we are not looking for/accepting/judging pure landscaping on apps, only buildings.
Build 2: The same as in Build 1 applies here.
Build 3: The cathedral you showed is way too over detail, there's too much going on. Shapes in slabs and stairs everywhere. Try to reduce that. Make builds look more like real-life, because that is what we are looking for.
Build 4: I don't know how to judge that. Is it a cave with interior? Well certainly, not what we are looking for on WoK. The fake Cliffside looks cool tho!
Build 5: Nice shapes but again very overkill when it comes too detailing - you don't know where to look first, there's too much going on and im missing realism there (i.e. floating water from the facade all over).
Build 6: I don't know what that is, but its not a realistic building that you would see in real life.
If you want to build on wok and get your app accepted, please just try to make your builds more REALISTIC and less CLUTTERED. Make sure to look at our towns before and get inspiration from real life aswell.
sylp
First of all: Thank you for taking time to apply and I hope you are doing better now than in your very harsh times.
Sadly I cannot accept your app for multiple reasons, I'll go through it for build after build.
Build 1: Landscaping is important on WoK, but we are not looking for/accepting/judging pure landscaping on apps, only buildings.
Build 2: The same as in Build 1 applies here.
Build 3: The cathedral you showed is way too over detail, there's too much going on. Shapes in slabs and stairs everywhere. Try to reduce that. Make builds look more like real-life, because that is what we are looking for.
Build 4: I don't know how to judge that. Is it a cave with interior? Well certainly, not what we are looking for on WoK. The fake Cliffside looks cool tho!
Build 5: Nice shapes but again very overkill when it comes too detailing - you don't know where to look first, there's too much going on and im missing realism there (i.e. floating water from the facade all over).
Build 6: I don't know what that is, but its not a realistic building that you would see in real life.
If you want to build on wok and get your app accepted, please just try to make your builds more REALISTIC and less CLUTTERED. Make sure to look at our towns before and get inspiration from real life aswell.
sylp
sylp | creative manager | member since 2013 | head of uP