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[Needs Improvement] building application
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Modern house:

https://imgur.com/gallery/XfcnqJN

High School:

https://imgur.com/gallery/TDgocgS

Old Chicago Tribune building:

https://imgur.com/gallery/MG7GqmI

Trumper heights:

https://imgur.com/gallery/WZTvsfi

Town House:

https://imgur.com/gallery/ly5fQmK

American house:

https://imgur.com/gallery/qGOciDG

Modernized old style house:

https://imgur.com/gallery/u3c1xMf

Summer condos:

https://imgur.com/gallery/TerNzKT

Bank:

https://imgur.com/gallery/W2Ne9zx

The White Pearl Pirate ship:

https://imgur.com/gallery/2sGyvB6

AMK movie theatre:

https://imgur.com/gallery/K3ZrWmx

1800's style American home:

https://imgur.com/gallery/WHrQui4

My town of Liberty:

https://imgur.com/gallery/mCKYyP2

Chick fil a:

https://imgur.com/gallery/25IswCJ

More buildings:

https://imgur.com/gallery/57YLemV
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#2
Hi samiboi, thanks for applying again. But after reviewing your application there are more bad builds than good builds, a little bit about each one of the ones we would like to see improvement on is the townhouse, very outdated and small scaled; not that much detail in the building and is kind of bland. The second build that needs improvement is the modern style houses, those are just very below standards as they are, very chunky looking with the small scale and one block wide window trim and the trim on the roof should be starts and not just blocks coming out as houses IRL don't just have the roof come out of the build, there are always trim. Summer condos; very basic and the window trim is very outdated, and if you have "summer condos" on the river you would want them to be luxurious since people are paying the money on the water, but I don't get the feel from that. The bank makes really little to no sense at all, where is the entrance in the building and what are the huge white bridges that are surrounding the building.It looks like you made a single wall and just rotated it 3 times and threw on a stone roof, also very outdated and most likely wouldn't be seen in real life... With the ship, I feel like the structure also makes no sense, with the huge white front coming up in the air and the chunky block on the back with the skinny bottom. I will give it to you, the movie theatre is alright, the windows are a bit odd on the front and the top trim is kinda weird, no contrast from trim to brick building and it looks like it just got kinda cut off by world edit, but the interior is good! The 1800's style american house is just very below standards in many ways, we've tried helping you fix that multiple times and you would just ignore it and move onto the next build onto that street, which ended up getting all deleted but that house. That house is very outdated as the garage door 3x the size of the front door, which a car is much bigger than that. I see the execution on the roofline but that was don't very poorly and it looks like there is trim missing in some parts of the build. All around not a great build to help your case on trying to get builder again. 

Now to start with the town of Liberty. The town I feel like has no structure/planning what so ever and the roads are 3 wide, and if you put the cars from our car grid, the side mirrors would be touching in the center lane and the parked cars on the side, its just very small scaled with bigger buildings which doesn't make that sense, the materials that you used for the roads are also a bit odd, is the whole town a one way with the white lines in the middle?? With the first picture with that diagonal building, how do cars get into that building from the opposite side of the road, I see that you tried to execute trying to make a double turning lane, but they would have to make a u-turn to try and get into that building. the last picture with the bridge, it has no support whatsoever, and is very low to the ground if you're trying to fit a semi truck under it. I wouldn't of also put the city in there since it doesn't help your case of trying to get builder back. 

The ChickFilA is very boring looking and very small with not that much detail. The extra buildings you added at the end are alright, but they are just very flat and kinda bland ( a trend I've seen after going through this app) With the green building, the first floor looks very small scale and then the second story looks like it has 9 high ceilings, so figuring out scaling is a huge issue with you ( in my personal opinion...) 


To wrap this all together, I am denying your build application since it seems like you just took pictures of builds in towns that got you demoted in the first place and haven't made an effort on trying to make some new better buildings, but instead you are yelling at staff telling us that we are bad builders and have no clue what we are doing and ragequit. This app shows the saying "quantity over quantity" you could have two amazing builds and get accepted and have 12 not so great builds and we won't accept you. Thanks for kind of trying to get builder again but it wasn't that much of effort since you haven't tried to better yourself from your time off. Try building some more and getting better and reapply. Do /warp guest and then /plot auto and we will be more than glad to help you, if you take our advice you could do amazing things on this server with being mature. 
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