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[Needs Improvement] Builder Application
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Hello and Welcome to my application, I'm gonna be honest I almost never finished my own builds, I went through very harsh times in the past and am still struggling with some **** in life noone really should deal with... Anyway, I will submit some of the doodles from play.mc-mega.com (aka Aj-Gaming) which I build all by myself and mostly even by Hand... Its really mainly doodles and I will only show the "furthest" builds I did make... I am decent at interior in my opinion but I still got some way to go for sure, especially when it comes to Terraforming and Organics, but just see for yourself... If you wish to visit my plots on Aj yourself just join creative and do /p v TenkaiSensei 1 - 21 its nothing big and I just realised I type way too much just check the links for yourself or the server which I prefer...
https://imgur.com/a/d3dMIP0 Just some Green scenery I build which I maybe will build further in the future depending on the time I have
https://imgur.com/a/ECxC0eg A Volcano I build in the past when I was really bored
https://imgur.com/a/LmCkK07 Part of a project I basicly gave up on due to me just beeing bad at Terraforming
https://imgur.com/a/vSuBpiL Probably my furthest step into abstract modern building and basicly a lot of just doodling and making... Im proud of the fake Cliffside tho
https://imgur.com/a/J3UI9qP More doodling
https://imgur.com/a/v4NgVrj and even more... 
I could keep going for a while with builds that I never really completed, but I would rather convince you myself by building anything you want for you, but I really hate Singleplayer worlds and rather enjoy having the chat move from time to time... And this leads to my reason for applying as well, as far as I'm informed WoK runs on 1.14... which Aj doesnt... or basicly none other does... And I want to build using 1.14 while beeing able to learn and improve my current Modern building styles... I hope for constructive feedback thanks for taking your time reading this Application and have a nice day or night.
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Hi Tenkai, as you asked for constructive feedback and I prefer to get that too, here we go:

First of all: Thank you for taking time to apply and I hope you are doing better now than in your very harsh times. 

Sadly I cannot accept your app for multiple reasons, I'll go through it for build after build.

Build 1: Landscaping is important on WoK, but we are not looking for/accepting/judging pure landscaping on apps, only buildings.
Build 2: The same as in Build 1 applies here.
Build 3: The cathedral you showed is way too over detail, there's too much going on. Shapes in slabs and stairs everywhere. Try to reduce that. Make builds look more like real-life, because that is what we are looking for.
Build 4: I don't know how to judge that. Is it a cave with interior? Well certainly, not what we are looking for on WoK. The fake Cliffside looks cool tho!
Build 5: Nice shapes but again very overkill when it comes too detailing - you don't know where to look first, there's too much going on and im missing realism there (i.e. floating water from the facade all over).
Build 6: I don't know what that is, but its not a realistic building that you would see in real life.

If you want to build on wok and get your app accepted, please just try to make your builds more REALISTIC and less CLUTTERED. Make sure to look at our towns before and get inspiration from real life aswell.

sylp
sylp | creative manager | member since 2013 | head of uP
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