[Needs Improvement] Application for Builder #2 #Resubmission

[StarryAditya]

Helllo !
My username is StarryAditya, and this is a redo of my application for builder. I hope I meet your standards this time.
Thanks 

Link -
https://imgur.com/a/2K6buqO

[Teh_]

Sadly this still doesnt meet the required standards, I can't stress enough how beneficial it can be to join the server and take ideas from current builds, Warps such as OxeyeValley and EchoBay can be great places for ideas, as well as real architecture.